*Sometimes a poem keeps whispering to me when I think it is finished, nudging itself and me into something more. Such is the case with yesterday’s poem. Which do you like better? I’d love to hear your thoughts! Wishing you sweetness always*
Wolf Moon
hungry howling sing
your yearning past the darkness
casting fear away
Jewniquely Myself 
I like both.
Thanks, Joanne, I really appreciate your comments!
Love you
Good afternoon Joan, They’re both awesome in their own right, but I like this one better.
Thanks so much for your comments, Patty!
The second is a more proper Haiku…whatever that is worth.
It also speaks me a bit more precisely.
Blessings and Love to you
Well, you’re more knowledgeable about those things than I am. I just thought this one spoke to me more.